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Re: Secrets of the Unfaithful {2}
Hi Angel! Here's my review for part two! I couldn't find any glaring errors in it, this is a solid chapter. I'm still interested in how these two characters are ...
Nov 17, 2008 -
Re: Secrets of the Unfaithful {1}
Hi Angel. This is the first of your five critiques you won. Yay! I'll be reviewing the second chapter of this later on. So, I noticed a problem in your ...
Nov 17, 2008 -
Re: The Running Away Song
Hi Clo! You get a review from me today! I really liked this poem. It had a sort of simplicity and innocence to it that really drew me in. I ...
Nov 17, 2008 -
Re: This is my 1000th Post!
Awesome, Clo!
Nov 17, 2008 -
Re: Connie's YWS Fan-Fic
I'm glad you two liked it. I was very proud of both of your parts. I hope you're okay with the literary representations of your digital selves.
Nov 17, 2008 -
Re: To Swallow a Swallow
Hi Suzanne! Since I'd heard so much about this poem from you, I figured I would try to review it. Anyway, this is interesting matter for a poem. I rather ...
Nov 16, 2008 -
Re: Connie's YWS Fan-Fic
Con: So, what am I going to write today? JFW1415: Write about horses! Con: No. Horses are dumb. *Every girl on YWS gets out a torch and pitchfork* Snoink: Dumb? ...
Nov 16, 2008 -
Re: 026. Siamo Anziani
Hi Imp! I'll be your first reviewer, methinks. four your health, for our city. That should be a for, not a four. But it's a small goof. Overall, I think ...
Nov 16, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {eighteen}
Well well well Ky. Here it is. Journey's end. A tale is rather like a journey, at least in my head. Our little friend Charlie certainly went on a journey, ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Death Threat to Prufrock
Clo. Clo Clo Clo Clo Clo. Such a wonderful name. Rolls right off the tongue. Anyways, since you were so nice and reviewed a poem of mine without me even ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Should I change Lake Girls name?
You can bend the story around so that Lake Girls fits better. Like, maybe have all the girl's live on Lake Street. It's all up to you in the end, ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Favorite YWS Writing
Let's see here... Anything of Kylan's is writerly gold. Especially his Siren series and The Elephant Boy. Clo's Hell in a Handbasket is good too. I haven't really read anything ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Do you consider it plagiarism
I wouldn't consider it lazy either. It's your work, you have every right in the world to do with it as you please.
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: 1500 Points Up for Grabs
I'll take points any day. What's the catch?
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: 04. Dumayu...
Hi Imp, I would have to say that this is a good piece. It had very beautiful imagery, and I liked how the city referenced the fact that it was ...
Nov 15, 2008